Guest Post: Liesel Hill

The One Element That Will Make Everyone Read Your Story

Why stories? Why characters and plot and conflict? Even before people could write, we were handing down stories through oral tradition. Today, the writing, reading, and watching of stories is a huge part of our lives and our world. Why is that?

One would think with all the conflict we face in our daily lives—from traffic jams and what to make for dinner, to work and relationship problems, to global conflicts—that we would be sick of the drama and just want to listen to Mozart all day long to soothe ourselves. Don’t get me wrong: I’m all about classical music, but most people who love reading and stories enough to follow book blogs simply crave drama, even in their spare time. And, truth be told, most people are that way, at least to some extent.

The question remains: why?

I’ll give you a few hints: The answer is something essential to our survival as a culture. As human beings, we thrive on it. As individuals, we latch onto it with unparalleled tenacity. It’s both noble and cliché. It’s what makes us get out of bed in the morning, pursue relationships, and set goals. On our worst days, it’s the one thing that can make us smile; the one thing that can bring us out of the darkest despair.

Have you guessed it yet? The answer is HOPE.

Think about it. If we don’t hope to live a good life, why work at all or try to make money? If we don’t hope for joy and love, what’s the point of cultivating any relationship, romantic or platonic? Heck, if we don’t hope for a good day, why get out of bed in the morning?  (I’m sure we’ve all had those times that we’d rather stay in bed and hide than face the day.) Hope propels us forward on every level and in every aspect of our lives.

What’s this got to do with a great story?

If you want people to read your story, you’ve got to give them the hope of satisfaction in ALL areas. (No pressure, right?)

With plot: You start your story one of two ways. A) with a negative world (poor Harry Potter has a sad, boring life where he lives with horrible, abusive people that make him sleep under the stairs) or B) with a pretty good world that is simply flawed, most likely because some negative force might come disrupt or destroy it (Frodo’s life in the Shire is happy and tranquil, but his world is flawed because a dark evil is brewing somewhere far away and that evil might destroy his beloved Shire).

By starting in one of these two ways, you’re making an unspoken pact with your readers about what is to come. They have a hope of satisfaction that things will get better.

For characters: we all know the best characters are dynamic, rather than static. This is (one of many) reasons why your characters must be flawed. They must have a personality flaw or a flawed belief system because the reader wants to see them change and grow. By showing a weak character at the beginning (a weak, submissive Harry or an oblivious, un-weathered Frodo) we make an unspoken pact with our readers that the characters will change and grow throughout the story. They hope for satisfaction on this count.

For setting: your setting should be intricately tied to your story. Especially in a fantasy world, or if you have some special setting that’s very different from what most of your readers see on a daily basis (Mt. Doom in the distance, perhaps?) you must deliver on this setting. Let the readers see it. Once you’ve mentioned a school of witchcraft and wizardry, it would be stupid to not let your characters explore it, right? So give them a promise of an awesome setting, which will play a major role in your story, and then deliver on it. They will have a hope for satisfaction.

By making promises about character, setting, and conflict, you are allowing your readers to hope for something. If you give them enough hope for satisfaction, they WILL continue reading.

The most dissatisfying stories out there are the ones that set up something major and then don’t deliver. I won’t name any names here but I’m sure we can all think of a few. Don’t do this!

Hope is what drives all aspects of a story because it’s also what drives us as human beings. Hope for a better world; hope for resolution; hope for a better person; hope for a happy ending; hope for satisfaction. If your story has this, the readers will return again and again.

~Liesel Hill

Liesel has her debut novel releasing soon!  Here is the cover and synopsis:

Synopsis: In a world where collective hives are enslaving the population and individuals have been hunted to the verge of extinction, Maggie Harper, an independent 21st Century woman, must find the strength to preserve the freedom of the future, but without the aid of her memories.
 
After experiencing a traumatic time loss, Maggie is plagued by a barrage of images she can’t explain. When she’s attacked by a creep with a spider’s web tattoo, she is saved by Marcus, a man she’s never met, but somehow remembers. He tells her that both he and her creepy attacker are from a future in which individuals are being murdered by collectives, and Marcus is part of the rebellion. The collectives have acquired time travel and they plan to enslave the human race throughout all of history. The flashes Maggie has been seeing are echoes of lost memories, and the information buried deep within them is instrumental in defeating the collective hives.
 
In order to preserve the individuality of mankind, Maggie must try to re-discover stolen memories, re-kindle friendships she has no recollection of, and wade through her feelings for the mysterious Marcus, all while dodging the tattooed assassins the collectives keep sending her way.
 
If Maggie can’t fill the holes in her memory and find the answers to stop the collectives, the world both in her time and in all ages past and future will be doomed to enslavement in the grey, mediocre collectives. As the danger swirls around her and the collectives close in, Maggie realizes she must make a choice: stand out or fade away…

 

Here’s where you can find Liesel:

 

In excitement for Iced

Image from Goodreads

 

In anticipation of Iced by Karen Marie Moning, coming out on October 30th, I’ve decided to reread the fever series.  I LOVE this series.  It’s one of my top two favorites.   Of course, I’ve already read the books multiple times before each new book was released, so I tend to skim to my favorite parts.  But I don’t think that’s cheating.  🙂  Right?

Is there a series that you absolutely love, and enjoy reading the previous books from when a new one comes out?

 

Happy October people!

~Pam

The Lure of Shapinsay

Ever since Kait Swanney could remember, the old crones of the village
have been warning her to stay away from the selkies. They claim
that like sirens of old, the seal men creep from the inky waters, shed
their skins, and entice women to their deaths beneath the North Sea. But avoiding an encounter becomes impossible when Kait is spotted at the water’s edge, moments after the murder of a half-selkie infant. 
 
 Kait is woken unexpectedly by a beautiful selkie man seeking revenge.
After she declares her innocence, the intruder darts into the night,
but not before inadvertently bewitching her with an overpowering lure. 
 
She obsesses over a reunion deep beneath the bay and risks her own
life to be reunited with her selkie. But when she lands the dangerous
lover, the chaos that follows leaves Kait little time to wonder—is
it love setting her on fire or has she simply been lured?

Watch the trailer!

This book looks really good; I’ve always been interested in selkies.  I can’t wait to read it, how about you?

Guest Post: Giacomo Giammatteo

How to network online to promote your book

I chose this topic for two reasons:

•             It is perhaps the biggest problem facing all authors today,

regardless of whether they are published by traditional houses, or

independents.

•             It is the single most difficult problem for me. It’s like facing my

own worst fear, so perhaps writing about it will help me as well as

others.

 

This is not a “how to” for social media. I’m not qualified to do

that. This is more of a sharing of my stumbles and mistakes. Maybe it

will help someone else.

 

I have no problem writing. I’m fortunate in that I never get writer’s

block. I don’t run out of stories to tell, or plots to work on. My

‘blogs to write’ list is endless…but…I have a terrible time with self

promotion.

 

This has been a rude awakening for me. I’ve been in sales of some

sort all my life. For the past thirty years I’ve been a headhunter,

and when you run your own business you are always a salesman, always

promoting yourself. But when it came time to promote myself online, as

an author, I froze up. I waited until the last minute to even get a

Twitter account. My Facebook page consisted of a few relatives and

friends. And I had never even heard of Pinterest. I still don’t know

how to use Google + or Tumblr.

 

So why was I uncomfortable selling my book? I was confident of the

writing. I knew it was a good book. It got great reviews,

but…selling the book was like selling me. It was too personal, too

close to me. And it felt too much like bragging.

 

A few weeks into the launch I ran across the World Literary Cafe, a

group run by Melissa Foster. They have several wonderful programs that

help authors learn, and get comfortable with, social media. I have to

say, it was a lifesaver. They have Tweet teams that allow an author to

market other people, while the other people market you.

 

This fit my style perfectly. I don’t mind marketing the heck out of

someone else; I just don’t like doing it for myself. So while I’m

touting these other authors, they are telling their followers about me

or my book.

 

They also have programs to help with Facebook and Goodreads, and many

other areas.

 

So right now, here’s what my social media strategy looks like:

 

Twitter: I use “Tweet teams” to help get the word out. I dedicate 20

minutes in the morning to adding new followers and tweeting, and

another ten in the afternoon or evening to sending tweets.

 

Facebook: I spend ten minutes each day, interacting with people on

Facebook and liking other pages. Most ‘like’ back.

 

Pinterest: I’m just building this network, but I am mostly posting

pics about the animals from our sanctuary.

 

Google +: I haven’t done much here yet, but it’s on my list.

 

Goodreads & Library Thing: I believe these two have the most

potential. I think reviews are the single biggest issue (after

visibility) facing authors. Every author needs to have a substantial

number of reviews if they are to be taken seriously. Reviews are

difficult to get, but places like Goodreads and Library Thing make it

easier. Authors can sponsor giveaways in exchange for (hopefully)

reviews.

 

Being sociable: This is perhaps the most important, and one that

might take the most time. I believe you have to truly interact with

others over an extended period of time, and develop relationships.

Once you have a network of true relationships, you can start helping

each other. That’s when things will click.

 

Other things: Blog, Linked in, Tumblr, etc…

 

Results:

After three weeks of using Twitter, when I never thought I’d ever use

Twitter, I am slowly getting more comfortable with it. I still look to

retweet other authors’ tweets more than I do my own content, but

that’s okay. The way I look at it, it all comes back to you in the

long run.

 

On my blog I do the same kind of thing. I’m not comfortable talking

about writing, or telling others what they should be doing. Who’s to

say that what works for me is right? Not me. So I talk mostly about

the animals on our sanctuary. And I try to tie the stories into

writing, or reading. Mostly though, I just tell stories in hopes that

someone will enjoy them. Not much different than writing a book.

 

Does this strategy work? It’s far too early to tell if what I’m doing

will have any benefit. Ask me next year and we’ll see.

 

~Giacomo Giammatteo, author of Murder Takes Time 

Murder Takes Time Spotlight

 
A string of brutal murders has bodies piling up in Brooklyn, and Detective Frankie Donovan knows what is going on. Clues left at the crime scenes point to someone from the old neighborhood, and that isn’t good.
Frankie has taken two oaths in his life—the one he took to uphold the law when he became a cop, and the one he took with his two best friends when they were eight years old and inseparable.
Those relationships have forced Frankie into many tough decisions, but now he faces the toughest one of his life; he has five murders to solve and one of those two friends is responsible. If Frankie lets him go, he breaks the oath he took as a cop and risks losing his job. But if he tries to bring him in, he breaks the oath he kept for twenty-five years—and risks losing his life.
In the neighborhood where Frankie Donovan grew up, you never broke an oath.

 

About the Author, Giacomo Giammatteo

I live in Texas now, but I grew up in Cleland Heights, a mixed ethnic neighborhood in Wilmington, Delaware that sat on the fringes of the Italian, Irish and Polish neighborhoods. The main characters of Murder Takes Time grew up in Cleland Heights and many of the scenes in the book were taken from real-life experiences.
Somehow I survived the transition to adulthood, but when my kids were young I left the Northeast and settled in Texas, where my wife suggested we get a few animals. I should have known better; we now have a full-blown animal sanctuary with rescues from all over. At last count we had 41 animals—12 dogs, a horse, a three-legged cat and 26 pigs.
Oh, and one crazy—and very large—wild boar, who takes walks with me every day and happens to also be my best buddy.
Since this is a bio some of you might wonder what I do. By day I am a headhunter, scouring the country for top talent to fill jobs in the biotech and medical device industry. In the evening I help my wife tend the animals, and at night—late at night—I turn into a writer.

 

Go check out the website: www.giacomogiammatteo.com. Look around, click some links, and, if you’ve got time, tell me what you think. Contact me at jim@giacomogiammatteo.com.