A Lot of Pride and Some Prejudice Review

 

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Title:  A Lot of Pride and Some Prejudice

Author:  Petronela Ungureanu

Published:  2013 by Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly Publishing, LLC

Genre:  Historical Romance, Novella

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Portia Thorpe grudgingly agrees to a marriage arranged by her father to Lord Salisbury.  He is much older than her and she has no interest in him; she just decides to do it for her father’s sake.  But Portia changes her mind when she meets Lord Salisbury’s brother, Phillip.  She feels an instant attraction to him and decides to back out of the marriage.  However, things don’t always go as planned as there is a sudden death in Portia’s family that turns all her plans around.

I was not expecting this book to be so wonderful.  The flow of the sentences was just smooth and refreshing.  I felt like I was thrown back in time.  It was such a nice change from the contemporary romances and other books I’ve been reading lately.

One major issue was the grammar and editing mistakes.  In one instance there were no quotes when someone was talking.  I counted at least three times when people ‘took a sit’ instead of ‘took a seat.’  And I really don’t know if this was done on purpose or not, but the beginning was one huge paragraph.

One other thing that irked me was how quickly Portia fell for Phillip Salisbury.  Her heart hurt a lot when she found out he was engaged.  It is the fact that she only met him the day before that bothered me about that.  Maybe if she had even spent a little more time with him it would have felt more justified.  Or maybe I’m just not a love at first sight type of girl?

Besides the grammar and love at first sight issues, the only thing that I wish was different was that it was a little longer!  It was a super-fast enjoyable read.  If someone could go back and re edit, I think that would make a world of difference.

All in all, I definitely recommend.  Keep an eye out for Petronela Ungureanu for she has a talent with words.

 

My Rating:  4 out of 5 stars

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~Pam

 

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The Cloud Seeders Review

 

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Title:  The Cloud Seeders

Author:  James Zerndt

Published:  2012 by James Zerndt

Genre:  Dystopia

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Eighteen year old Thomas is currently the sole provider and guardian for his nine-year-old brother Dustin.  They haven’t seen their parents in over a year.  Both Dustin and Thomas work on water patrol as Officers of Sustainability.  It hasn’t rained in a very long time, and water is so scarce that people get fined if they are misusing or using too much water.  It’s Thomas’s job to find these people who misuse water.  While Thomas doesn’t necessarily agree with what he does, it’s his way to provide for his small family and keep under the radar.  His girlfriend, Jerusha, is a little more daring, living her life making recycled water and selling it on the black market.  Together with Jerusha they go across country to find their parents.  They find both friends and trouble along the way.

This book was surprisingly unique, unlike any other dystopian I’ve read.  Glancing through other reviews some call it depressing, but isn’t all dystopia depressing?

Thomas is a strong character.  Although he works for the government finding people who misuse water, he slyly gives them a break as well.  One woman his brother and himself happened upon had eight offenses.  Dustin, being only nine, got excited about this, because they get points for each ‘ticket’ they give and can trade them in for fresh water.  Thomas, being older and wiser, sends his brother off and only gives the woman two tickets.

His girlfriend Jerusha is confident and daring.  She knows what’s happening in the world is out of control.  And she’s a great big sister-like figure to Dustin.

Throughout the book we get to read poems by Thomas’s mother and see some memories of her as well.  One such memory is Thomas’s mom teaching him how to surf; he was sure that the wave was way too big.  His mom laughed and said, “Oh, Thomas.  The only limits are the ones you choose to see.”  (page 78).

And another memory Thomas has,

I remember something Mom told us once.  How the world is made up of two kinds of people:  steak knives and butter knives.  For the steak knives, life comes easy.  They cut right through things without any trouble.  For the butter knives, things are a little difficult, take a little longer.  But eventually get the job done.  (page 256)

I like his mom.

So although this book is a little dark it was a page turner and the ending doesn’t leave you sad.  If you like dystopia, definitely give The Cloud Seeders a try.

 

My Rating:  3 1/2 out of 5 stars

 

~Pam

*****I received this book free from Pump Up Your Book in exchange for an honest review.*****

 

About the Author:

James Zerndt lives in Portland, Oregon, with his wife and son. His poetry has appeared in The Oregonian Newspaper, and his fiction has most recently appeared in Gray’s Sporting Journal and SWINK magazine. He rarely refers to himself in the third person.

His latest book is the YA scifi, The Cloud Seeders.

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The Broken Parts of Us Release Day Blitz & Giveaway

Some people search their whole life for a connection — a reason to be here, and feel life in all of its intensity.. But what if you never wanted to experience that emotion? Jasper lived his life coldly determined never to fall in love. Some people impact your life in a moment, and will stay in your life forever from then on. What if an irresistible force crashes into you — not once, but twice, and from a totally unexpected source? Jasper must overcome past demons that are still plaguing him and his friends. He must face future choices he never knew he would have to make. Sexual chemistry can come in all forms. When the lines blur between friendship, love and lust, a new darkness finds its way into their lives. Either these relationships survive or die forever broken ……in The Broken Parts of Us

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Jasper’s nightmares, and the frantic call from River telling me Michael pushed her down the stairs; her sobbing cries telling me he was Danny’s, left me really not feeling up for company tonight.

Danny still haunts us after six long years. I would never change the family I ended up with from the rubble of Danny’s earth-shattering actions, but I’m so angry that they’re  still suffering, and would give anything to take away the damage he inflicted.

People don’t realise trauma stays with you. It may fade, it may become easier to cope with, but it’s like scar tissue; it will always be there and no amount of healing can rid you of it.

Not all scars are visible. Sometimes the worst scars are the ones you can’t see; they’re the ones that hold your mind hostage in nightmares. They’re the ones that manipulate your emotions, making guilt crawl into your mind, polluting reasonable thought. Guilt can be so hard to live with; consuming and painful.

People think death is the worst thing that can happen but it’s not, it’s the living that other people have to go on doing once someone we love is taken from this world. It’s the what ifs that constantly replay in our minds. It’s the did they know I loved them? What would they be like if they were here now? How do I get up today and live with this agony?

The only thing that makes it slightly easier is having family to live for, to love, to get up and go on coping for. River has become like a sister to me. She fills a void left by my own sister; her death still plagues me and I feel responsible for her taking her life. River and I share this same grief. We are bonded by a shared misery; a painful sorrow that is a part of us.

Sammy has become like the brother I never had. We share a love for River, but also we are survivors. We have both looked the devil in the eye and lived to breathe another day.

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Feature & Follow #22 – Books to Read in 2014

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This weeks question:  What books are you looking forward to reading in 2014?

There are two that I cannot wait for.  Seriously, it feels like I’m eight years old and it’s Christmas and I just want to scream with excitement!  haha.  Here they are:

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I hope you all have a great weekend!

~Pam

A Sinister Obsession Review

 

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Title:  A Sinister Obsession

Author:  S.B. Redstone

Published:  2013 by Black Opal Books

Genre:  Mystery Thriller

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George and Ann Marr have never been able to get back their happiness after their son was found murdered over 10 years ago.  Little do they know that they are about to be killed themselves.  Their murder sets off a series of crimes that has Detective Aubrey McKenzie trying to scramble to find the killer.  Detective Aubrey is considered a ‘witch’ by her comrades; they can’t figure out how she always seems to know certain details involved in crimes she is solving.  Aubrey is also a stubborn woman, and she plans to find who this killer is no matter what.

The point of view shifts a bit in this book but it didn’t really bother me, except in the beginning when it was shifting between paragraphs a few times.  The author got it in control soon after though.  And once we are introduced to Detective Aubrey, the point of view is mostly hers; well, hers and the killers.

Something that bothered me was when a detective at one of the crime scenes says, “looks like a burglary to me.” (location 1388 of 7919 on Kindle).  When there are dead bodies around it’s a robbery.  A burglary happens without harming anyone.  A robbery uses physical force and threats.  A detective should know the difference!  He does say robbery on the next page though, so maybe it just was an editing error?  But it’s still something that caught my eye.

Let’s talk about the main character, Aubrey.  What a rich snob she is!  When someone she is interviewing is drinking a glass of wine this is what runs through Aubrey’s head,

“Chilling a red wine?  And one so inferior I wouldn’t even use it to cook with.” (location 1450 of 7919 on Kindle)

Yikes, I’m glad she’s not my friend!  But it does make the book more interesting to read, because if you think about it, it’s always the men who are rich, not the ladies.  And she definitely has a cold personality at first, (there turns out to be a reason why) but romance is found in the story and she warms up a bit.

When Aubrey meets another detective named Josh, you get to see her in a more flattering light.  She’s still cold at first, but she warms up and the reader will warm up to her at that point too.  Although still incredibly rich of course, she starts to act like a normal human being, with feelings.

Another thing that bothered me was when a couple who had a child and gave her up for adoption kept saying things like we could have had an abortion, we did the right thing.  And not only them, but others said the same thing.  (Trying to be vague here for those who will read the book.)  It was just too much, and didn’t add to the story.  It just aggravated me actually.  Obviously abortion is a touchy subject, but I just had enough with everyone saying that.  It made the conversation not feel real as well.

Okay, one last thing.  Aubrey has a paranormal ability to read people’s minds.  No one knows she has this ability, but they do wonder how she solves cases so fast and efficiently sometimes.  They actually call her a witch.  No one calls people witches these days.  Change the word ‘witch’ with ‘psychic’ and problem solved.

Despite my complaints, it was a good book.  It kept me interested throughout the whole thing.  And although some might get grossed out by the murders, it really wasn’t too bad.  (And I’m a fainter at the sight and thought of blood type of person.)  You also aren’t in the dark on who the killer is the whole time either.  The detective figures it out and then you can see through the killers eyes as well.

So if you’re into mystery and psychological thrillers, give A Sinister Obsession a try.

 

My Rating:  3 1/2 out of 5 stars

 

~Pam

 

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